The Trip Chapter One Posted At the BDSM Library

The Trip Chapter One has been posted at the BDSM Library and one of my favorite reviewers, Jimmy Jump provided the insight below.

Often, the difference between a so-so story and a really good one, is the way the author approaches his/her subject. Providing, of course, that there's enough writing skill there to pull off the story in the first place.

That Michael Alexander has the skill is not an issue, neither are most of his approaches.
Although there's nothing 'out of the ordinary' about "The Trip", the story still stands out thanks to the aforementioned skill in portraying the different characters and their interaction.

The depth of the characters is what 'saves' the story in some places --areas where other, lesser, authors would go off the rails are kept on track by Michael Alexander through his descriptions and/or inner musings/conversations.

That there's little nuisances here and there (like the use of 'bit tad' or 'nodded' in three consecutive short paragraphs) do nothing to take away the reading pleasure.

An ordinary story about less ordinary people told in an extraordinary fashion.

I'll be here when episode 2 is being delivered.

JJ (9/10)

Well rest assured Jimmy, the rest is written, but it won't be posted at the Library! Check it out in the VIP LOUNGE at Michael Alexander Stories. Get a sneak peak at the BDSM Library!